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Re: Dream World
This was an interesting narrative. I really liked the concept. However, at certain points in the story, I lost track of who was who. You might consider making it a ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: Polluted Lives
“Your needed at the base,” replied Carter. You're, not your. That was the only grammatical error that I could find. The other complaints I have with this have more to ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Rose of The West (pt. 2)
Part 2 Connie -- [Ronnie] Ronnie lay in bed staring at the ceiling. Another day was over and done. His back ached. The overflow truck had come in today; and ...
Jul 7, 2009 -
Re: Rose of The West (pt. 1)
A/N: A collab between Kylan and Conrad Rice. Kylan -- [James] pod # 43: a deep breath and the universe contracts around us, pulled in like a lung. we hear ...
Jul 7, 2009
